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In the City of Winkler, writing rules.
Here are my 20 golden ones:
- The hardest part of writing is getting those words out of your head on to a page.
- Struggle to get started? Put a timer on for ten minutes and see how far you go. Then set it for another ten.
- The first draft always looks a complete mess. Accept it.
- Don’t agonise over that perfect first sentence. Start anywhere and return to your stunning opener later.
- Think about your reader. Will he or she understand technical terms? Or need simpler explanations? Picturing your reader (age, gender, background) helps get the tone right.
- Don’t assume your reader knows what you know. Retain ‘beginner’s mind’. Resist the temptation to show off your superior knowledge – this is about sharing.
- A long sentence loses the reader. Four lines is a crime. Break a long sentence into two.
- Vary the length of your sentences, and their shape. Every sentence in the same paragraph should begin differently.
- Be eagle-eyed about repetition. Use a thesaurus to find alternative words.
- Be consistent. If different spellings exist, spell it the same way each time.
- It and it’s. Although most possessive forms have an apostrophe (a rose’s smell), when it comes to the dastardly it, the rules are different. The apostrophe denotes a missing letter – it’s stands for it is. If you are unsure which spelling to use, replace your its/it’s with “it is”. Say it is aloud to yourself. Does it make sense? (She loved it is smell). If not, use its.
- To make your copy more immediate, use active (doing) verbs, such as “I am writing the rules”. Passive (done to) verbs are less direct, as in “the rules are being written“.
- Express one (or max, two) points per paragraph. The first sentence makes a statement and the rest of the paragraph qualifies it.
- Group paragraphs dealing with the same topic together, in a logical sequence, starting with the most important, or the one that comes first chronologically.
- When it’s time to move to the next main topic, find a sentence to introduce this new topic.
- Give signposts such as “The evidence is far from clear”. Don’t be afraid to spell things out: “The main reasons for accepting the evidence are…”
- Writing is rereading what you have written, and rewriting. You have to identify the bumpy bits, and iron them out. Over and over again.
- Read your finished copy out aloud. The ear can pick up what the eye has got tired of seeing. The cause of the hiccup may be poor grammar, an incorrect fact, punctuation or lack of clarity.
- Ask someone else to read what you have written. Request they tell you if they do not understand anything and which bit it is. Don’t get huffy if they do. Responsibility for successful communication lies with the communicator.
- Read more. It will help improve your writing, spelling and grammar. You will become more familiar with the way words look and sound. It’s about seeing what works.
If you use these rules, please leave a comment below.
I am also available to give customised writing tutorials and courses in Europe.
Thank you!
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Roz // February 20, 2009 at 8:08 pm |
I really really like your tips – and how generous of you to share them. Of course you deserve a credit – not just for their clarity but for taking the time and effort to be so useful to other people who may be struggling.
In my experience, using a timer is an excellent way to get over the fear of sitting there with yourself and a blank page – ditto the advice not to agonise over that all-important first line, but to get some words down!
Also it is always good to hear from a professional that first drafts are a mess – no matter how long you have been writing. In order to write, you have to allow yourself to make mistakes or – as Natalie Goldberg (Writing Down The Bones) says: you are free to write the worst junk in the world. That frees you up a lot!
Knowing your reader is another excellent tip and goes hand in hand with reading lots – it really does help! Also useful is your reminder that writing is re-writing and re-writing often until you virtually know a piece off-by-heart. Beginner’s mind is the most helpful mind in the world – for everything. Thank you so much for the spirit with which you share all the things you learn and experience.
Roz // February 20, 2009 at 8:32 pm |
P.s. As a novelist and creative writing tutor (and a former journalist) I would just suggest that writing rules 12 to 16 are more relevant to journalism than creative writing.
realfoodlover // February 20, 2009 at 8:37 pm |
Roz, I agree. Thanks fellow tutor (Roz and I have taught Practical Journalism courses all over the southwest including at the Arvon Foundation.)
Rob Crompton // February 24, 2009 at 7:28 pm |
Lots of sound advice in these tips. But I have one very minor quibble. You advise using a thesaurus to find alternative words. My own view is, don’t use the thesaurus – choose alternative words from your own active vocabulary, not from someone else’s supersmart vocab.
So I suppose I’d have to add another tip – no, you’ve got it there at number twenty. Read more. In other words, build up your vocab and language skills from literature.
Jon // February 25, 2009 at 4:35 pm |
To expand on 11)
When substituting for ‘it is’ makes sense then you should use an apostrophe.
E.g. Only when it’s raining -> Only when it is raining.
And likewise if substituting for ‘his’ makes sense then you should NOT use an apostrophe.
E.g. Hold its head still -> Hold his head still.
Therefore no apostrophe in this case!
realfoodlover // February 25, 2009 at 9:47 pm |
Zemanta, thank you for the City of Winkler badge.
Zemanta popped the image onto my draft blog – one of the canny features of this free blogging tool.
The City of Winkler exists in real life, in Canada.
It also exists in my imagination as a safe place for sensitives.
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realfoodlover // April 11, 2009 at 12:03 pm |
“We have not passed that subtle line between childhood and adulthood until we move from the passive voice to the active voice – that is, until we have stopped saying ‘It got lost,’ and say, ‘I lost it.’” – Sydney J. Harris, journalist (1917-1986)
More on active and passive from http://tinyurl.com/c53k98
Both Word and Google Docs have tools to count your use of active and passive in a document
1. Select the Check grammar with spelling check box (see Preferences in Word)
2. Select the Show readability statistics check box, and then click OK.
3. On the Tools menu, click Spelling and Grammar.
I hope this works…
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Andrew // May 29, 2009 at 3:15 am |
Thanks for your encouragement on my blog!
This is a great list that I will return to again and again.
realfoodlover // July 12, 2009 at 12:35 pm |
Winkler’s Writing Rules got a fab plug from the judges of the Guild of Food Writers Awards 2009. They said my rules “should be required reading for aspiring writers online or in print”.
More nice things said about my food blog at the Observer/Guardian Word of Mouth blog here http://bit.ly/NI32Q
sarah scarlett // July 28, 2009 at 12:17 pm |
thanks for sharing the writing tips Elisabeth. I found them an excellent prompt and also forwarded them onto a friend. looking forward to seeing your recipe for the ginger poultice you were telling me about last week. x
Uncle Malcolm // September 15, 2009 at 2:32 pm |
Dear Elisabeth.
We are in First Nations Country, in Vancouver BCat the moment.
Love your Winkler Writing Tips. You should have told me about them before. I could have used them. I’ll pass them on to Susanna.
Love
Malcolm
Malcolm
realfoodlover // September 18, 2009 at 11:24 pm |
Thank you, Malcolm. I guess it took going to Canada to read my blog. Sigh. No, just kidding! Delighted you visited and glad you liked Winkler’s Writing Tips. Yes, please pass them on to Susanna and have a wonderful visit. x
James // September 25, 2009 at 9:17 am |
Ten minute timer – I love it!
cleansheets // September 25, 2009 at 10:18 am |
Thanks for rule 11 – been meaning to clarify that since I started my blog. The apostrophe- it’s great to know its place!
Helen Bevan // November 1, 2009 at 12:04 pm |
I’m no blogger, but I liked your site.
I particularly liked your Writing Tips, and the comment by Roz on rules 12 to 16.
Being in the process of trying to get my first book, (on my paranormal experiences), published it was helpful to have these reminders – I’m currently at the editing (and re-editing) stage.
I will try the one about reading my work aloud.